Monday, January 24, 2011

Blog Entry #2.21 - Greeting Card 3 Reject (B,D)

The consumer targeted by this greeting card is a child. This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because it doesn't have as much detail as the other card. This design can be improved by using a darker blue than the image as the background to better appeal to the consumer.

Blog Entry #2.20 - Greeting Card 3 (B,D)

The consumer targeted by this greeting card is a child. The image is meant to appeal to this consumer because it is an animated image with a little girl in it. The background color of the inside of the card was changed because it did not match the outside of the card.

Blog Entry #2.19 - Greeting Card 2 Reject (B,D)

The consumer targeted by this greeting card is an adult. This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because the image had lots of things going on at once. If the image was changed to a simpler version, this design could better appeal to the consumer.

Blog Entry #2.19 - Greeting Card 2 Reject

Blog Entry #2.19 - Greeting Card 2 Reject

Blog Entry #2.18 - Greeting card 2 (B,D)


The consumer targeted by this greeting card is an adult. The image is supposed to appeal to this consumer because it is lots of foods and drinks on the table and it sends out a message of a special holiday beoing celebrated. The background was changed because it didn't go with the image.

Blog Etnry 2.17 - Greeting Card 1 Reject (B,D)

The consumer targeted by this greeting card is a teenager. This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because the background color does not match with the image as best as it could have and there a lot of empty space in the background. This design can be improved by changing the background color.

Blog Entry #2.16 - Greeting card 1 (B,D)


This greeting card is made for teenagers. The image is supposed to appeal to this consumer because it has lots of popular and historical places that are brought together in a fun way. There are also animated decorations. Compared to the original sketch, the background color was changed because a blue backgroung did not blend in with the image, but the a background did.

Sunday, January 23, 2011

Blog Entry #2.22- Human Ingenuity

A person that doesn't like drinking can be offended by the card that has lots of food and a drink that looks like alcohol on the table. This is because they can think alcohol is bad and shouldn't be on the cover of a card.

Thursday, January 20, 2011

Blog Entry # 2.15 - Process Journal 4 (E)

The image, writing and color of the card have been completed so far. I need to do this for 5 more cards in order to finish makeing all 6 cards. My work can be improved by choosing background colors that go with my picture. I would give myself a 5 on criteria F because i have been doing what i am supposed to do safely and i was motivated. I can improve my score by being more independant because i ask a lot of questions about the work.

Blog Entry # 2.14 - Progress (D)





























Blog Entry # 2.12 - Progress (D)


Thursday, January 13, 2011

Blog Entry # 2.13 - Process journal 3 (E)

So far, the cover images and the writings on the inside are complete for my greeting cards. I need to Think of titles for my cards and i need to make the cards on Adobe Illustrator. I could improve my work by choosing colors that make people want to buy the cards. Iwould give my self a 5 for criteria F because i do the work i am given in class, i only talk when i have a question about the work we're doing or am being asked a question. I can work more quickly and get all of my work done in class to improve my score.

Thursday, January 6, 2011

Blog Entry # 2.11 - Process Journal 2 (E)

I have thought of what to make the card covers look like, what to write on the inside and what shape to make the cards. my work could be improved by finding better writings for the inside. my work can also be improved by finding a catchy title for the card.

i would give myself a 5 because i have good attitudes towards safety, cooperation and respect for others and i have good personal engagement. But i could improve on the personal engagement.

Blog Entry #2.10 - Targey Consumers (B)

Target Consumer #1 is people of ages 30 and up. They will have families whim they want to give gifts to. The card will be given in Eid al-Fitr when people come to eachother's houses to get together, eat, and have fun. They would want cards that are not so bright but have a bit broghtness. They would be for consumers who want little writting in the inside so that they can have room to write what they want.

Target Consumer #2 are teenagers who want to give each other Eid al-Fitr cards. They would want the cover of their card to be full of color. They would also want it to be bright. They would want to give it to their friends before theyspend the holiday with their family. They would also want to give it to their family.

Target Consumer #3 are little kids. It will be made for those who want to give their family and friends a card. it would be colorfull. It would also have cartoons to appeal to them. The words used would be easy for them to understand. It would also have space for them to write what they want.

Blog Entry #2.9 - Text Brainstorm(B)

Happy Eid al-Fitr

Best wishes for Eid al-Fitr

Happy end of the feasting month

may your holiday be filled with joy

you are wished a happy Eid al-Fitr by all your loved ones

greeting for Eid al-Fitr